Recently I embarked on a new
challenge, converting one of my books into an audio book. I don’t now even recall how I happened to
stumble upon the idea; maybe one of the blogs I follow or one of the updates
from my many writers’ forums mentioned ACX.com and my investigation took off
from there. ACX is an Amazon company much like Create Space in that it provides
an easy, affordable way to produce books, in this case audio books rather than
physical books. ACX acts rather like a passive agent, creating a neutral middle
ground where authors and producers can meet and explore working together. It’s
a fairly simple and straightforward process.
I registered information about my
book Marcia Gates: Angel of Bataan some
months ago. I uploaded the first chapter, the blurb, the cover image, my desire
for a female voice and my choices for a working arrangement. There are two ways
to pay for a book producer/narrator: one is to pay them up front for their
time, estimated to be roughly between $100-200 an hour; the second way is to
pay no up-front fees and split the royalties with them 50/50. I chose the
latter for several reasons. First, I was not comfortable parting with a large
up-front outlay when I was trialing this whole idea for the first time, and it made
sense to me that if the producer were to be heavily invested in the success of
the book (i.e. royalties), s/he would do his/her utmost to promote it just as I
would.
So I put my book up there, went
about my other writerly duties and promptly forgot about it.
One of the drawbacks I’ve found to
having ten or twenty or fifty irons in the fire at one time is the tendency to
lose track of some of them. When I got an e-mail that I had an audition waiting
to be reviewed, I was pleasantly surprised. Oh, yeah—audio book!
I logged into ACX and found my
dashboard, figured out how to play the audition and listened to the first
chapter of my book come alive. It was pretty fascinating; the words, of course,
were patently familiar to me, but the tone of voice, the inflection, the
emphasis were all new. It was interesting to hear a voice so different than my
own read my words in ways that varied slightly from my intended emphasis. That
variation was a little jarring at first, but not entirely at odds. I liked her
expression, and if it seemed like there was room for improvement, the good news
was that I thought her voice was closer to a fit than a definite misfit.
Through ACX, I sent her a message
saying I had listened to the audition and I thought we had something going
here. Turns out she thought so, too.
This particular book is the
biography of my aunt, an army nurse and prisoner-of-war of the Japanese in the
Philippines during World War II, and so was a labor of love for me. Imagine my
surprise when my producer replied back that she chose my book as a way to honor
her father, who had also served in the Philippines! Right away we connected on
a very emotional level, and we both felt we could put together a fitting
tribute to our families in this joined effort.
Offers sent and accepted, the next
milestone was for her to produce a 15-minute sample for my approval. I quickly
found out that she and her husband are voice-over actors and have their own
sound studio, so producing the sample was all within her means. The fact that
her husband was a professional voice, as well, sparked an idea. My book is
written in an epistolary style, using copious amounts of letters, newspaper
articles and telegrams to tell the story as it unfolded in real time. As the
book is told from the point of view of my aunt and her mother, I wanted a
primary female voice, yet some of the letters are from men, and a male voice
would make a nice contrast in those areas. I asked her if her husband would be
up for playing a few “bit parts” in my book. Not only did they readily agree,
they even expanded his role and he narrated parts of my father’s autobiography
that I had incorporated into my book, as well.
Boy, oh, boy, I thought as I
listened to the sample. This is going to be good.
And it will be. We’re now into
full-on production. She will upload chapters as she completes them and we’ll
chart the progress together. Exciting stuff!
But certainly you didn’t think this
story was going to be all rainbows and unicorns, did you?
I was ready for challenges. I was
ready to have to reconsider my desires, to not expect or demand perfection, to
compromise and adjust my expectations as this singular “mine, mine, all mine”
project suddenly became a collaboration.
I was not expecting my brain to get
turned sideways.
I listened to the sample the first
time with the text in front of me, a red pen at the ready, checking for correct
word usage, punctuation, whatever small missteps there might be. But as I
listened, it began to dawn on me how many small clues we include in our writing
that do not translate to the audio.
It began with the Prologue. I wrote
the Prologue, a short background of my pioneer family, from my own first-person
point of view as opposed to the impersonal observer’s POV I use in the book
itself. On the page, it looks like this:
Prologue
Marcia Louise Gates rose from a family that
was populated by strong women and hard-working men. ….. (quick history here) ….
With this for a foundation, it hardly seems surprising that one of them would
eventually earn the title of hero.
—Melissa Bowersock
However, in the audio, all the
little visual clues are gone: the em dash in front of my name, even the
paragraph breaks. It sounds like this:
Prologue.
Marcia Gates … (blah blah) … earn the title of hero. Melissa Bowersock.
The listener cannot see the
paragraph breaks to know that we’re starting a new thought; they cannot see the
semi-colons to know that we’re introducing a related yet completely separate idea.
They cannot see the suggestion of “air-quotes” or the emphasis of italics to drive a point home. They
can’t see ellipses to know where they should finish a sentence themselves … or
not. All of this very subtle but very important information must be built in by
the narrator’s voice.
My respect for audio book readers
just ratcheted up a whole bunch of notches. And I’m extremely grateful that I’ve
got a professional helping me with this project.